In class, we learned about different ways to set up a comparison essay. One way is the block method, which is done by having all of the information on the first topic presented, and then having all information of the second topic. Another way that we learned was called the flip- flop method. In this method, you first write about one specific idea about your topic and then write about another specific idea. It is important to continually connect and compare corresponding ideas.
We have also read two articles that are examples of comparison essays in class. The first one called, "Brothers, Bad Blood and the Blackwater Tangle," was a story about two brothers who were involved with the Blackwater scandle. The security contractor was accused of killing 17 Iraqis in Baghdad, while guarding a State Department convoy.
The second article that we have read was called, "Battle of the Beds: Suave S.U.V.’s With Pickup Lines." This essay compared the strengths and weaknesses of the Ford Explorer Sport Trac to the Chevrolet Avalanche. While the Explorer Sport Trac is smaller and less expensive than the Chevrolet Avalanche, the Sport Trac comes with a very small cargo bed. And even though the Chevrolet Avalanche can be opened up from the back of the cab to extend its cargo- carrying capacity, it takes away the two back seats, making the vehicle unsecure.
Both of these essays were set up very differently. While the article about the two brothers did not have a particular writing style, the one comparing the pick- up trucks followed more of the block method.
I plan to use this information to help me with my essay because after seeing several examples of different writting styles used I can pick one that works the best for me.
Thursday, November 29, 2007
Monday, November 12, 2007
Cell Phone Jammers
In the New York Times, the article describing Jammers used to block out cell phone signals was interesting and something that I had never heard of before. Even though these cell phone devices are illegal in the United States, several are still shipped here over seas. I think that cell phone jammers are irresponsible and not only cut off a single person’s cell phone signal, but any others in a 30 ft. radius.
Jamming cell phones and cutting off people’s single could also be very dangerous in emergency situations. For example, as mentioned in the article, if a criminal obtains a cell jammer he could use it to stop someone from communicating in a crisis.
Jamming cell phones and cutting off people’s single could also be very dangerous in emergency situations. For example, as mentioned in the article, if a criminal obtains a cell jammer he could use it to stop someone from communicating in a crisis.
Tuesday, November 6, 2007
What is a blog?
A blog is an informal personal memo, and could be about anything you want. It could be used to post your thoughts and ideas, or even just pictures. It could also be used for school, as a personal diary, a way of communication, or just for fun. Blogging is a way to have different people from all over the world read what you have to say and leave you comments and responses.
From the websites that I visited, there were many examples of different types of blogs. Most of them were made up of short concise paragraphs and some even included pictures. Each website was set up in its own unique way with different fonts and backgrounds, and all of them were based on a different topic. One website that I visited included different tips for life, such as 10 Effective Ways to Increase Your Energy Levels. This website is very interesting and gives useful advice that can be used throughout everyday life such as learning new ways to increase your enery.
From the websites that I visited, there were many examples of different types of blogs. Most of them were made up of short concise paragraphs and some even included pictures. Each website was set up in its own unique way with different fonts and backgrounds, and all of them were based on a different topic. One website that I visited included different tips for life, such as 10 Effective Ways to Increase Your Energy Levels. This website is very interesting and gives useful advice that can be used throughout everyday life such as learning new ways to increase your enery.
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